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Table of Differences for Chapters 6 - 9THE TORY LOVER
Sarah Orne JewettThe Atlantic Monthly Serialization
December 1900 -- 86:738-754
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- "Gundelow" in the Atlantic text becomes "gundalow" in the first edition text.Chapter 6
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A fine group of elderly gentlewomen
the doorway as Miss Hamilton |
This fine group of elderly gentlewomen
the doorway as Mary Hamilton |
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There was still an anxious | There were ladies of every age in this large evening company, and plenty of elderly gentlemen, although it might be thought dull for want of beaux. In the smaller northwest parlor, and easily seen and heard through the open door, was a smiling posse of boys, the escorts of their mothers or pretty sisters, -- half-grown young persons, who were at one moment in devoted attendance, sobered with a dread of being mistaken for anything but men of forty, and at the next chuckling and pushing one another with a distinct air of schoolboy indifference. They gave little promise of ever rivaling their elders in any distinction of looks or behavior: but while the ladies now and then bestowed a withering glance, the men, recognizing that there must be lapses in the process of development, seemed to view these future citizens with a kinder tolerance. There was still an anxious |
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and Miss Betsey Wyat
favorite of the old Judge. |
and Betsey Wyat
favorite of Judge Chadbourne. |
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most straightforward earnestness | most straight-forward earnestness |
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You shall have our hopes and prayers | You shall have my prayers |
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And I shall endeavor to remember | And I will endeavor to remember |
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I shall give you mine | I will give you mine |
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in Mary Hamilton's breast that | in Mary Hamilton's heart that |
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These friends of his and mine | Many friends of his and mine |
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regretful look at her happy face
lookout of the housetop within the |
regretful look in her happy face
lookout of the housetop, within the |
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hail and farewell. The whole countryside |
hail and farewell.
The whole countryside |
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sea chests and sailors' bags
the far heights of the Cumberland |
sea chests and sailors' kits
the heights of the Cumberland |
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Lord's Berwick men had reached | Lord's Berwick company had reached |
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taken off young Humphry Lord | taken off young Ichabod Lord |
Chapter 7
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a clumsy trading-vessel | a clumsy trading vessel. |
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had come out of the houses | had come out of their houses |
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on the seaward forts at Newcastle | on the forts at Newcastle |
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and handsome card-rooms | and handsome rooms |
Chapter 8
In this chapter "breakfast-room" becomes "breakfast room,"
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Dover; to the south was the dark pine-forested region of
the Rocky Hills.
wind, wrapped in his red cloak and either carriages or foot-travelers |
.Dover, and the blue heights of Deerfield and
Nottingham; to the south was the dark pine-forested region
of the Rocky Hills.
wind wrapped in his red cloak, and either carriages or travelers |
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for giving a farewell feast | for giving a parting feast |
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pushed the ferule of his stout old ivory-handled cane | pushed his stout old ivory-headed cane |
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a man can get nothing decent | a man can buy nothing decent |
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and hope filled the major's once sorrowful mind. "Jack Hamilton, by zounds!" laughed the old gentleman. |
and hope filled the major's once sorrowful mind. "Jack Hamilton, by zounds!" laughed the old gentleman. |
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tracts of woodland; he really must not vex his conscience by loitering. | tracts of land; he really must not vex his conscience enough to dismount. |
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voice might reach round
Hamilton dismounted unwillingly |
voice might better reach round
Hamilton threw his leg over the saddle and dismounted unwillingly |
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breathless, began to walk | breathless, had begun to walk |
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Lebanon, as the new folks want | Lebanon, as the good folks want |
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a plain turban which | a plain turban twisted high, which |
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its rise of temperature | its rise of temperature all the more |
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the flavor's well brought out | the flavor's brought out |
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set your turban all awry | set your turban awry |
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counting-room | counting room |
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past Pine Point | past High Point |
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warm and peaceful now before | warm and peaceful again before |
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She has great reserve | Mary has great reserve |
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fire, at thinking I was too old | fire, with thinking I was too old |
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breakfast-room | breakfast room |
Chapter 9
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the first of November | the 1st of November. |
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Ranger must be safe off | Ranger must be well off |
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a half amused, half curious glance | a half-amused, half-curious glance |
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she slid away the ledger | she pushed away the ledger |
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spatter of mulled wine for him. Come, find | spatter of hot water to mix him a posset. Come, do find |
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cheese afterward and plenty of bread | cheese afterward and plenty of cakes |
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in the dining parlor to-night | in the dining room to-night |
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weigh his spirit down | weigh him down |
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tell her if I had stayed | tell her if I stayed |
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she thanked me
‘Now, he has nothing tell others what's in them |
she loudly thanked me
‘Well, he has nothing tell others what's in 'em |
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say no more. . . . | say no more. |
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