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Table of Differences for Chapters 10 - 12

THE TORY LOVER
Sarah Orne Jewett

The Atlantic Monthly Serialization

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Chapter 10

Paragraph  First Edition Text  Atlantic Monthly Text
 
      
 3
 but Miss Hamilton, without but Mary, without
 6
 our way, she'll take it master hard  our way, she's took it master hard 
 10-11
 for general conversation.
   Mary Hamilton paddled steadily		 for general conversation.

   Mary Hamilton paddled steadily
 11
 wind was driving the ebbing tide wind had driven the ebbing tide
 13
 the landing-place the landing place
 15
 the President of the Province and many of the chief men the President and many of the chief men of the Province
 16
 in the Queen's Chapel at Portsmouth

Mary Hamilton prayed

 in old St. John's at Portsmouth

Mary Hamilton had prayed
 18
 Rodney, the chief house servant Rodney, the house servant
 20
 carefully down the steps again; carefully down the stairs again,
 20-20A
 the familiar house.  Once Rodney the familiar house.
       Once Rodney
 21
 gentle to her dis day gentle with her dis day
 22
 the dining-room the dining room

 

Chapter 11


Paragraph  First Edition Text  Atlantic Monthly Text
 
 
 .
 1
 white knitting-work

She had manner rather than manners

 white knitting work

She had manners rather than manner
 3-3A
  Madam Wallingford.  The march of events   Madam Wallingford.
     The march of events 
 9
 so nothing could be done so that nothing could be done
 11
 could go on: yet something could go on; yet something
 14
 this change until he said this change till he said
 24
 the Loyalists had frightened him the Loyalists had frighted him
 25
 sudden knowledge of new happiness sudden happiness
 27
 and with dull candlelight

in his best characters, when

 and with dullest candlelight

in his best plays, when
 29
 Mary could not understand Mary did not understand
 30
 The candlelight in the upper The candle-light in the upper
34 
 I called to them from the door to come I called from the door to them to come
 37
 as if to listen, as the patient as if to listen as the patient

 

Chapter 12


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 .
 1
 cleared the Banks with

such thorough-going sailors

 cleared the Banks, with

such thoroughgoing sailors
 4
 in this surprising moment 

it was the time

 in that surprising moment 

't was the time
 6
 see him get a black stripe

when he seen Mr. Wallin'ford

for pity of his folks

 seen him get a black stripe

when he see Mr. Wallin'ford

for pity o' his folks
 9
 crumpled clothing hanging out crumpled cloth hanging out
 10
 It was a manly crew 'T was a manly crew
 19
 pleasant countenance unaltered pleasant countenance, unaltered
 23
 forlorn abiding-place forlorn abiding place
 35
 close hauled

to lay her clear down

 close-hauled

to lay her down
 37
 appeared to be surly appeared surly
40
 said Cooper, compassionately said Cooper compassionately
 44
 pass me his linning handkicher pass me his linning hankicher
 45
 ain't had three hours sleep

through the sky-light

 ain't had three hours' sleep

through the skylight
 52
 mouth o' hell." mouth o' hell!"
 54
 "What a farmer you be," "What a farmer you be!"

 
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