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Table of Differences for Chapters 17 - 21THE TORY LOVER
Sarah Orne JewettThe Atlantic Monthly Serialization
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Chapter 17
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sticking out of his pocket; I often hid | sticking out of his pocket, on his way to hear music with Madame de L'Enclos, once mistress to the great Cardinal. I hid |
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excuse for staying home?
Our Roger is born out |
excuse for staying at home?
But Roger is born out |
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that now Roger will see France, again,
can even stumble through the orchard ground and |
that our Roger will see France again,
can also stumble through the orchard ground, and |
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They both laughed, | And they both laughed, |
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Horace fell from his lap | Horace fell heavily from his lap |
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ourselves, and he has new ideas; I heard | ourselves. And he has new ideas. I heard |
Chapter 18
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destructive, crafty, and evil-minded | destructive, crafty and evil-minded |
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He had already set them | He had now set them |
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O God, how I love her | My God, how I love her |
Chapter 19
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his own arrival. It was understood | his own arrival. It was understood |
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American ship of war. There was nothing | American ship of war. There was nothing |
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since the world began. Dickson stood |
since the world began.
Dickson stood |
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I own that it is a great disappointment | I own that 't is a great disappointment |
Chapter 20
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hand; it is long | hand; 't is long |
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Roger Wallingford; "we were | Roger Wallingford: "we were |
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pacing the deck together. They
come to naught; he had |
pacing the deck. They
come to naught: he had |
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It were easy enough
the quarterdeck |
'T were easy enough
the quarter-deck |
Chapter 21
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fresh from its tailor's wrappings | fresh from the tailor's wrappings |
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boots in my clean linen | boots in my clean shirts |
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last ones to pack your gear for you | last to pack your clothes for ye |
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If anything should happen to me | If anything happens to me |
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her mother's feet by the great Renaissance tomb | her mother's feet in the great Renaissance tomb |
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much spending-money had made most | much spending money had made most |
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next one saw him thus; frank | next one saw him thus: frank |
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explained the captain with frankness
distresses, though I had longed |
explained the captain, with frankness
distresses, and I had longed |
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I lived there for a month | I lived there for a while |
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where he sails the sea; but
as for Bailli Suffren, he has wide they tread from |
where he sails the seas; but
as for Bailli Suffren, himself, he has wide they tread, from |
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must now deal with their best French dishes | must deal with their best French dishes |
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great man for the proprieties | great man for all the proprieties |
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